I will always remember my granny
She was a woman in her own right, and loved by many
She was a woman of great strength and pride
With a character all her own, and she took things in stride
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Thank you for introducing Granny to us. This rings out it's warm family love and I am quite sure that the example Granny gave you will last your own life through, as it echoes in your own poems. First rate verse. 10
The only question here, was whether to give this a nine or a ten. I thought that since there were some pretty good rhymes init, that it deserved a ten. That's because I can't help believing that even today, Granny's book is still making music in the rhymes of her granddaughter. GW62
I loved your poem, and it was very well crafted. You must treasure the memory of your grandmother!