Sunday, May 8, 2011

Granite Melting Comments

Rating: 2.7

He had a face of chiseled granite
complete with stony smile
that face is embedded in my heart
which lies clutched here
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Lonnie Hicks
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 May 2011

Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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