Monday, November 9, 2015

Grandson Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Our little grandson who is almost four
For devilment he knows no bounds
A rogue if you ever met one
In the house as he plays around
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Daniel Bernard Kelleher
pride school Dad Grandson Grandmother
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Margaret O Driscoll 10 November 2015

Very natural and sincere, reciprocal love, wonderful!

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Daniel Kelleher 10 November 2015

Thank you for your thoughts very kind

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Daniel Kelleher 10 November 2015

Thank you Kim well spotted, errors corrected.Thank you for kind words

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Kim Barney 09 November 2015

I love the poem. It only has two minor mistakes that I noticed, easily fixed: First verse: I think you meant ROGUE instead of ROUGE. Last line needs an apostrophe: His grandmother's pride and joy Well done!

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Daniel Kelleher 10 November 2015

Errors corrected well spotted.Thank you for your kind words

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Daniel Bernard Kelleher

Daniel Bernard Kelleher

Cork, Ireland
Daniel Bernard Kelleher
Daniel Bernard Kelleher
Cork, Ireland
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