Grandpa Was Here Comments

I don't fully understand this poem, Herbs, but I still like the way it jumps from allusion to allusion. Love, Gina.

I like the lovely conversational English of this. I never for a second think you are ginning the story, or working a screwdriver into my ribs! It's not even se timental - just lovingly matter-of-fact - good writing. For what it's worth, the ending statement mystifies me. I maybe get it - but I'm not confident I do.Not am ideal result for such a purposeful poem!

very well-written...you have a great style...lovely poem!