Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Grandpa's Lake Comments

Rating: 5.0

He was sitting by himself all alone,
Down in a little corner.
Looking out of place, in the funeral home,
And away from all the mourners.
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Juan Olivarez
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Wendy Thopliss 05 January 2011

This was lovely to read juan. i guess i forgot my grandad because i have had so many closer relative's who have passed away, but reading this made me remember how i loved my grandad.although i was only eleven when he died your poem has brought back memories which i had forgotten.thank you for giving me back my memories of my Grandad.10+

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Lynn Glover 04 January 2011

Beautifully done Juan as usual. I enjoyed each stanza and as I read the poem it took me back to the fishing days with my Grandpa. Thanks for such a wonderful trip into my past. Lynn

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