Sunday, May 29, 2022

Grandpa, I'm Coming Comments

Rating: 4.7

Grandpa, I'm feeling such sorrow.
I just keep on falling apart,
Cannot face one more tomorrow.
Nothing does ease my heavy heart.
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Ima Ryma
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Bri Edwards 30 May 2022

four stars. But, ask the codger/old fellow BEFORE he dies! ! ! : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 30 May 2022

Your psuedonym is most apt, as your poem is, ....with rhyme, ....well-wrapped. bri ;)

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Kim Barney 29 May 2022

I'm a grandpa, and I can tell you that the good old days weren't always all that good.

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