Grandpa, I'm feeling such sorrow.
I just keep on falling apart,
Cannot face one more tomorrow.
Nothing does ease my heavy heart.
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Your psuedonym is most apt, as your poem is, ....with rhyme, ....well-wrapped. bri ;)
I'm a grandpa, and I can tell you that the good old days weren't always all that good.
four stars. But, ask the codger/old fellow BEFORE he dies! ! ! : ) bri