Sunday, April 10, 2016

Grandpa Comments

Rating: 4.8

The old man looked up, glasses on head
Sitting in his own chair, by the fireplace.
Aye, I know what you want to do, he said
As he went to the table, and cleared a space.
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Bill Wright
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Michael Mc Dermott 16 September 2018

Very succinct. You capture the mood of a solid relationship between the boy and his grandfather. No nonsense, just plain talk with a lot of feelings and meaning behind the everyday things. Well done Billy. I put one up (michael mcdermott) to see how it works and if you could check I will know the drill. Thanks for your help

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R.k.s. Yadav [ Rahee] 25 May 2016

Lots of memories of happy days Playing many games at grandpa's place....very emotional and heart touching thoughts about the man who lives in every heart...beautifully penned I really enjoyed. thanks for sharing

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2016

Dominoes are an easy game to play, A young boy even knows what he should do. Grandpa advising me what I should lay, Helping me to win the odd game or two. Lots of memories of happy days, Playing many games at grandpa's place.... sweet ways of grandpa and how u learn from his experiences. just a symbolic way of telling the reader that one can learn a lot from old people. love this poem for its symbolic character. tony

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