Wednesday, January 20, 2021

Grandmum's Invitation Comments

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Grandmum's Invitation

Dear Vinhie, come to granny,
let us in the garden play,
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Sylvia Frances Chan
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Varsha M 21 January 2021

This is really beautiful poem. Grandma and grandchildren share special niche. Time spent with grandparents always are most cherished....and your apple cake most tasty. And your cookies awaiting all are alluring.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

A lovely poem with mention of exotic snow, and delicious cake, sweetly inviting grandchild to play. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 January 2021

Wow awesome poem, one of your very best indeed, snowfall is exotic for mwow this is a lovely poem with exotic snow and delicious apple cake and sweetly invites grandchild to play with granny. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too titled, 'mini earthquake experiences'

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Sylvia Frances Chan

Sylvia Frances Chan

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