Monday, November 21, 2011

Grandmama Comments

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My grandmama would knit serene
as through the window
came a stream of sunlight ribbons
for her hair.
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John Raubenheimer 28 November 2011

Full of light and colour this - You have made a picture of your grandmama I can see. Isn't poetry the ultimate in mind-transference, telepathy if you like?

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Meggie Gultiano 21 November 2011

this is a very beautiful tribute.Love every words here.thanks for sharing.God bless! !

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Unwritten Soul 21 November 2011

The knitted poem inspired by grandmama really creating a nice and fine structure here..It relax my mind through the words therapy you shared here...reduce some stress to repress the pressure, and the lines told with all pleasure and i am sure this is very nice poem to soothe bad new days by consuming god old memory..nice write Sally _Unwritten Soul

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