Wednesday, November 27, 2013

Grandma's Dementia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Last Monday, grandma told me in between her gasping for breath that I smell bad
My armpit reeks of lost melody
My general odour is burnt incense laid on a corpse
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P.K Freitas
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Ebi Robert 02 December 2013

I love this work. Keep writing. More greasetoyourelbow.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 30 November 2013

A good and nice poem. I rated 10

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