Sunday, September 7, 2008

Grandma And Grandpa Comments

Rating: 4.7

Grandma and grandpa need an iron,
they’re such a wrinkly pair.
I am sure they weren’t that crumpled,
the last time I was there.
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Pamela lutwyche
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Colleen Ogrady 07 October 2020

This poem reminds me of my beloved grandparents on the maternal side!

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Dr Antony Theodore 30 August 2020

Grandpa grows veg, in his vegetable patch, grandma can freeze it, to make it last. Grandpa, says grandma cooks such lovely grub, grandma says to grandpa lets eat, then go down to the pub. very interesting and lovely poem. on grands.. tony

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Chinedu Dike 06 August 2020

An interesting story nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Beautiful and heartfelt piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Stephen Stirk 10 March 2009

Such memories as these, are priceless, as is the way you write them. I like this style which is like a poem meeting a story. I also love the wit that runs right through it. I don't give marks, (I'm not a teacher) . this would have been 10.64 recurring Steve A Mad Merseyside poet

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Mifael Llauderes 31 October 2008

sooo lovely, pamela. you are so lucky you still have them around. great write.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

back to childhood says people are the same at the age of 7 and 70 good work

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Kathleen West 15 September 2008

I love this poem. It's humorous, and I can visualize grandma and grandpa too, they sound like a fun pair.! I'm glad you listen to their stories and wrote this poem, It will be fun for you to look back at it years from now and enjoy.

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Ivor Hogg 13 September 2008

Our elders know a thing or two if only you will listen to Entrancing tales of yesteryear which are not really hard to bear. You might just learn something new or just because the love you

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Pamela lutwyche

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