Monday, January 20, 2003

Grandfather Says Comments

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"Sit in my hand."
I'm ten.
I can't see him,
but I hear him breathing
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Surya . 18 June 2009

what a pathetic story! nicely and vividly expressed. i hate such people. we need lessons in moral values. voted 10 surya

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Melvina Germain 22 January 2007

How very sad, a very sad picture painted here. Sad memories brought forth from a devistating time in childhood years. It takes a great deal of courage to write about this experience. Excellent poem---Melvina---

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