My heart hums like bees
And flutters like butterflies,
Blooms like the blossoms
And sings like the cardinals -
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Beautiful display of fine poetic skills. Well conceived and nicely brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Put all of spring together in heart....lovely...a complete poem....thank you
You have bottled and corked up all the beauty of spring in this lovely Tanka! Really enjoyed!
A poem full of life brought by the wonders and beauty of spring. A marvelous write well executed.10
Hi Bipasha, Wowow! Lovely Tanka. The charms of spring, the king of seasons brought out so effectively and heartily. A lovely 100 and on to my poems.ist, so that I am reminded to come back for a re...
Lovely Tanka. Magic of spring charms expressed in so beautifully. Thank you for sharing Bipasha.
Wonderful poem..your heart is singing a lovely song at this spring
A cute little poem.... just beautiful