The darkness showcases its grief,
unpublished,
in the night-sky of remembrance.
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And the watery edge of the lotus-leaf portrays the curve of karma-yoga. Bathed in dew-drops, yet untouched by water. these are wonderful lines, sarvesh.i loved them.
a bit of philosophic shade apart this poem is full of soft romantic imageries that would spur the reader heart...Matthew does a nice and correct observation on your poetic skill downline...excellent piece...10
untouched by water...to live like the lotus...everyone's utopia, isn't it?
brilliant imagery...a lovely philosophy at the end...beautiful....10