Friday, October 16, 2009

...Grandeur Of Nature Comments

Rating: 5.0

The darkness showcases its grief,
unpublished,
in the night-sky of remembrance.
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 24 October 2009

brilliant imagery...a lovely philosophy at the end...beautiful....10

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Maitreyee Joshi 23 October 2009

And the watery edge of the lotus-leaf portrays the curve of karma-yoga. Bathed in dew-drops, yet untouched by water. these are wonderful lines, sarvesh.i loved them.

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Vaibhav Pandey 20 October 2009

awesome poem sarvesh....filled with brilliant imagery...10

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Kesav Easwaran 18 October 2009

a bit of philosophic shade apart this poem is full of soft romantic imageries that would spur the reader heart...Matthew does a nice and correct observation on your poetic skill downline...excellent piece...10

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Indira Babbellapati 16 October 2009

untouched by water...to live like the lotus...everyone's utopia, isn't it?

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