Grandeur Of Life! ! ! Comments

Singing of grandeur of sorrow, this soft and mellow piece touches the heart.

Smile in tears! The presence of darkness makes the light covetable and brighter! If we can view our tribulations from this angle, life becomes easier and more pleasurable! ! A Great poem with great comparisons and poignancy of feelings! !

This one piece is a highly educative one indeed. Time and again we are reminded of all such requisites for leading a balanced life but often do not track them much. It is a poem that glorifies pleasures of pains embedded to our life`s phases.

This one piece is a highly educative one indeed. Time and again we are reminded of all such requisites for leading a balanced life but often do not track them much. It is a poem that glorifies pleasures of pains embedded to our life`s phases.

A lovely poem i admired tday on d bittersweet facets n response to life. Did u read my poem mail?

A lovely, poem for the living. So true.

Life is indeed grand. No matter how harsh the pain or gloom, in a distant past we tend to see it in a very different light than in the actual moment. The sun will shine on our tears, our bruised heart will heal. Counting our remaining blessings in a deep sense of gratitude can sometimes speed up the process. Life is grand and this poem will help many people to see this wonderful fact. Excellent write

Colours from the darkness. Wonderful!

reality is, people judge...working through how to present ourselves to others is its own self battle. I feel you in this write today. Love this one as i am relating today thanks

Such are the things that make life so delicate, and thus precious.

A bit nihilistic and steeped in sorrow where the poet could easily have put a positive twist to it. Existential negation and finding solace in misery may be a decent into pathos and gloom bordering on Dickinson tinges. We may get our catharsis from Tess, yet our lives are as tangible as the apple we bite into, and maybe just as satisfying … if we choose to look for it. But I liked the flow and the content, you have managed to infuse in it a heaviness that we all carry around and call it destiny. ***

It takes a lot of guts for a bruised heart to smile. when such smile is compared to the colors of the rainbow which is formed at the back dropp of teary drops of water, it seems to be so beautiful... very nice and well written! 10

xlent write, fabulous, When a bruised heart smiles and this smile creates hues, bright more than the colored stripes of the magical rainbow, then-and only then the glee looks grand; and these facts form the grandeur of life! ! ! what a descent write

good one..fundamental poetry and the punctuations i see teachered and trained in semicolons, commas, dashes starting with an exciting exclamation of three times-compact one

wonderful poetry! i love it..

When our heart turns from darkness to light that's the beautiful moment. Marvelous Shahzia.