Sunday, September 30, 2007

Grande Amor Comments

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O Grande Amor,
take me somewhere beautiful.
Wrap me in rocking rhythms and breathy low notes,
and speak to me,
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Delilah Miller
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Lucianne Fasolo 30 September 2007

Sweet poem. Good job, :) Just one little thing. Portuguese is my mother tongue, so I just read the title and assumed that expression you put in your poem was in Portuguese, : D It could be Spanish, too, but then the article would be another (El Grande Amor, I'm pretty sure, lol) . Anyway, I couldn't understand why you used the 'O' article before 'Grande Amor'. It wasn't really necessary, : P When we're referring to someone/something like that we use no articles. Unless I'm being completely idiotic and what you meant was 'O, Grande Amor'? If that was the case, I'm so sorry! ! ! : D

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