Grandad Comments

wow, an amazing poem, so emotional. I nearly cried just reading it.

Great structure and well expressed feelings. Masterpiece Ian

A very sad poem, Grandad is a milestone in every family also a light house. The Death is an unbelievable character, who knocks at old doors as same as new doors.Sean you have shown the maturity.

Poems of such personal matters should not be rated. I think you've done a lovely tribute to a man you admired..Well done. Always, Amberlee

this was a trully sad poem, it made me cry.. maybe because i wish I could remember my Grand Dad more. You've done a wonderful job here, the images were gentle and endearing while the figure of your Grand dad is penned perfectly. well done my friend! HBH

I like the voice and imagery in this, Sean. Exceptional.