Thursday, March 27, 2014

Grand Children Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I am annoyed by my son and daughters,
My grand children come to me,
In a hot summer the soothing showers,
A rainbowpleasing to see.
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Bri Edwards 28 November 2020

P.S. But....grandchildren CAN BE grand children! ;) bri

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Bri Edwards 28 November 2020

Nice. I'd say 'annoyed BY', not 'of' I'd join grand children to be one word, if meaning children of your children. Maybe a British influence causes some foreign born poets on PH to split some 'American' spellings. I've noticed this at times with others here e.g. Savita T and Valsa G, bri ;)

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Indira Renganathan 30 October 2017

You have surpassed all the praises for your other poems just to stand out as the Best Poet of the Best Poem in this work...you have beautifully reflected the feelings of all the grand parents Akhtar...I'm immensely happy to read this...my best wishes to you, your children and grand children...thanks a lot for this great work

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2016

It is said that you do not become a parent until you have grandchildren.When we are parents, we are busy trying to earn a living and have less time to spend with our children. As grandparents, we have all the time and our grandchildren benefits! thank you sir- 10

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M Asim Nehal 22 February 2016

Grandchildrens are like stars in galaxy.......10++++

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Abhilasha Bhatt 19 February 2016

Truly a heart touching poem....thank you for sharing :)

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Bisma Mirza 11 September 2015

Heart touching write.................................

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Khalid Saifullah 17 February 2015

A heart touching poem.....................10

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Valsa George 01 June 2014

The love grand parents have for theri grand children is unmatched.... I remember... my father used to be quite reserved with his children while we were young unlike the modern fathers. But how, he like a child played with his grand children! He showed so much of patience with them, though he used to get irritated with us for simple lapses! Enjoyed your poem and your comparison of your grand children to butterflies!

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Biplab Singha 29 March 2014

i salute your fatherhood. nice poem thanks

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V P Mahur 28 March 2014

Dear Sir, Very sweet loving feelings. I too have experienced it with my grand daughter. Nice poem Thanks! Please reply.

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