And there he hung, far up the tree,
he had been looking for the eggs
of the Australian Kolibree.
They'd finished both the VB kegs
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You tell a great story; this one had me eagerly scrolling down to find out what would happen. I happen to enjoy narrative poetry, and you tell a story in verse as well as anyone.
so i tried to read how you write.. (to learnabout poetry) but this is too long herbert.. sorry.. good luck.. keep up the good work!
Great story Herbert...your right I did enjoy it! You do tell a good story...I do like your long ones too....lol!