Friday, March 21, 2008

Grains Of Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's about a girl i read about who had amnesia and it took her years to remember everything but she didn't give up and she got some memory back eventually from reading all her old diaries and stuff. Please be nice about it, i know it's not very good, but i tried :)

Peacefully she perches on her rock of thought
a search for stolen memories of her life before.
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Rebecca Davies
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Mary Gordley 22 March 2008

Rebecca, I like this poem quite a lot. You chose a very different and interesting topic and delivered a very reader friendly poem. Welcome to poemhunter. Thanks for this poem and I will be looking forward to more from you.

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