Friday, March 2, 2012

Grains Of Sand Comments

Rating: 2.5

If my tears were grains of sand
I would be buried in a vast desert
were men will tread but will find no hope..
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Nana Cruz
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Clinton Ekeh 03 March 2012

Woah! I could feel so vividly the emotions in your writing. Great composition you have, best of luck!

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Robert Green 03 March 2012

I like this. I can feel it.

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