Monday, July 27, 2009

Grain Of Sand Comments

Rating: 5.0

See time as a grain of sand
and heaven as the glass
you hold with care within your hand
to watch each moment pass.
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Marieta Maglas 28 July 2009

''I often have this dream, strange, penetrating, Of a woman, unknown, whom I love, who loves me, And who’s never, each time, the same exactly, Nor, exactly, different: and knows me, is loving. Oh how she knows me, and my heart, growing Clear for her, alone, is no longer a problem, For her alone, she alone understands, then, How to cool the sweat of my brow with her weeping.'' Paul Verlaine I like your wonderful lyric poem, Gershon, with well embedded romantic ideas of love......10++++from me

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A great imagery. We have a handful of sand unfortunately.10.

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