Graffiti Comments

... must you torture us so? Brilliant, simply brilliant.

I'll graffiti your stilllife until I meet my end. That's so powerful. I like your line breaks here & how the letters are falling. I like to do this also (After reading Guillaume Apollinaire, of course) . When you can make it that much more visual, it helps people read it easier I think. Great poem! !

comes*...b/c deleting & reposting may result in multiple posts, lol.

I like the strength that come through in this poem. Favorite line: And I will N e v e r Be A grey blob in your scene Smudged and weathered to blend