Wednesday, July 22, 2015

Graduation Party Comments

Rating: 5.0

A gentleman or so he seemed
A graduation present was his need
From me my cherry was his goal
Given his way he would have stole
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Darlene Walsh
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Khairul Ahsan 29 March 2020

Use of force under this kind of a situation is disgusting and abhorable.

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Amitava Sur 28 August 2015

WOW ' naughty Darlene, what a treat! ! But yes, that is the befitting reply you gave and all the girls all over the world should do that to men who think that they can do anything to a girl at anytime by force. Very nice Darlene.A nice message and threat.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 31 July 2015

Wow a sarcastic poem deriding someone who acted so forcibly. He deserves this mocking humiliation. U wrote it in awesome flow n rhymes and I enjoy such extraordinary poems. Great to read from you again.

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White Monkey 28 July 2015

I had a giggle. im sure he got hurt a lot. i really hope so! thanks for the great writing!

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Clarence Prince 22 July 2015

I got a laughed out of this poem, It's a wonder if he speak the language, when after so many times no, and yet he was still going for your precious cherry! It's a good job that you manage to resisted him! Save your cherry for Mr. Right, Darlene! Thank for sharing!

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