Gracefulness Comments

I wish I was graceful...but I'm not.: -( Hugs, Dee

Sterling work, David...Excellent employment of imagery...Nice, crisp, tight structural work..Splendid Crafting, my friend. FjR

I agree with your ending like in my [eyes that glance across a crowded room line in Lost Chances.] this is magically enjoyable, like a gentle flirting put to words...Can't let those moments pass us by for, there may never be another chance to recapture, what could have, should have, might have been....marci.xo

and a graceful tribute it is too, gentil parfit cnight!

Just marvelous poem you got here David. You were able to capture the aura or emotional atmosphere when men like us are captivated by the garcefulness of women. They struck us flatfooted sometimes. worth 10.