! ! ! Grace Of Love! ! ! Comments

wonderful visual metaphors of color like: ''rock of the heart intones in blue passion when chilled by snow '' in a descriptive poem.....I can see here only colors and feelings and i understand the nature like a blind woman...10+++

a brilliant verse! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! given 10

lovely well written piece...thanks for sharing it with us...

A poem which examplifies enigmatic incoherence of shades of nature yet underlines the beauty of the whole canvas!

really confusing (not a bad thing) but gets better every time you read it, and some imagery in here is extremly euphonic and touching

beautfiul imagery and great diction beauty seems assauged by hope...I couldn't agree with you more

Good rhythm and tone, nice work.

absolutely amazing you have talent and im glad you shared it nice one :)

An amazing write. So beautiful & well put together. 10!

Great use of words. I love how it was put together!

A lovely work which i associated with a spiritual awakening on first reading, therefore the word 'bequeathing' jarred on me also

This poem is excellent. There are a few 'bugs' in it. The word 'bequeathing' doesn't sound right to me. It is associated more with death and you're talking of 'warmth' in a beneficial way. 'Betiding' is an unusual word. Good/Bad? Remove 'the' from 'the river runs.' That way the line is consistent with the others. Then instead of 'to mingle, ' mingles alone reads better, as most of the poem is devoid of articles and prepositions. And so remove 'the' from 'the skin of hope.' Other than that you have a very lively poem and a great vocabulary. Kaye Cee

love is beautifully personified in this poem with the elements of nature...

Showing love to your poem. Great poem! It great of how you describe the graces of love with the beautifulness of Earth, the snow to the blue sea. You show how beatuiful side of Earth as a mean to show the graces of love, A great combination of both! I'm sorry if I don't make any sense in my comment.

There's an encouraging feeling of wealth and warmth. On the other hand, if there's love. As a further encouragement I should remember John Keats.

Amazing...the textures are layered so beautifully in this poem, with color and contrast...loved it. thanks.

The beautiful piece is very emotional and characterized by passion. Keep it up.10+

I can really the feel the emotion in your poetry. You definatly write what comes from your heart and its quickly makeing you one of my favorites! ! ! Keep it up.

What love can do reflects this poem! Words and phrases were like air floating and moving inside me! It's a 10!

Great composition! I love this poem. Thank you.10+++