Monday, March 31, 2014

Grace Comments

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I live in a bubble
A poetic bubble
My mind stumbles
My heart crumbles.
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Gnossienne 12 April 2014

Beautifully written. As I was reading this poem I didn't want it to end and I found the language and longing expressed here so nourishing. I particularly loved the last verse where you credit the Lord as the author of your fine words.

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Gnossienne 12 April 2014

Beautifully written. As I was reading this poem I didn't want it to end and I found the language and longing expressed here so nourishing. I particularly loved the last verse where you credit the Lord as the author of your fine words.

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