Grace Comments

I have lost Rachel Ann Butler

the hardest thing about styles like this is the soul. the soul of the writer is hard to capture and of all of your poems i have read it has that soul

Written straight from your heart with a melancholy edge. I liked the last stanza as your outcome is well decided. Great work. Karin Anderson

Written straight from your heart with a melancholy edge. I liked the last stanza as your outcome is well decided. Great work. Karin Anderson

that was good i liked it.

Anjali Sinha (2/5/2009 8: 43: 00 AM) | Delete this message 'Do you realise how hard it is Walking up these lonely stairs Knowing that when you reach the top There’s going to be no-one there that cares' ahaaaaaaaaa you touchhhhhhhhhed me there ++++++10 anjali

I feel, the words outpour dejection and self pacification in a good flow..great10

Bilal, all is beautiful if you add a bit of positive note in your poems. At the top of the triangle you are alone, As come down multiple images moan. One can't play, two can't tolerate, So, hang between love and hate! CP

Such a poignant composition crafted with beautiful rhymes and right placement of words, soft tone structured with a heartfelt mood....10/10