Thursday, September 29, 2005

Gouged Out Comments

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Now I am gouged out.
Silt slopped to the side
A ruin, safe only for owls.
Saplings reaching out from the harsh cracks
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Anthony Dalby
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C.H Grocock 03 January 2006

Hmmm nice imagery here, it tells me your feeling of a dying tree, hope i've seen it right.nicly written.

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Max Reif 29 September 2005

I appreciate the way your consciousness works-seeing, resulting in a telling, with significance embedded.

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