Gothic Scene Comments

'And pointing down austere spikes hang down' Rachel Ann Butler

you'll have to stop walking down those dark alleys and come out into the sunlight.....good poem this one! Ruthy; -)

i really like your poem its very good

I really love this poem, from the beguiling title to the form, to the rhyme, rhythm and effortless wordflow - and as for the atmosphere, it definitely has touches of T.S Eliot's 'Rhapsody on a Windy Night'. S :)

The words paint the picture very clear for me, a dark and dingy place of dwelling, where pain is never heard. Great!