Friday, December 12, 2008

Gothic Love......(A Restless Soul....) Comments

Rating: 5.0

When everyone in this world gone to sleep
she is the only soul who awaken's from her bed
As she walks the lonely road
her dark shadow seen crawling on the wall
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Sebastine Humaemo
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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

so touching...this is heart-quenching... very expressive..the thoughts are impressive ...the lines flows smoothly...bringing the pain and the hollowness into my heart... really...really sad.... 10+++ for this...

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Winnie Angel 11 January 2009

a heart touching poem.....expressing the genuine love and her helpless plight..fighting betwn her wishes and impossibility! ! ! ....

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Naidz Ladia 11 January 2009

so sad....so sad....whatta wonderful love they had...but is it justfiable? speechless on ths poem of urs sweet tine..

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 16 December 2008

a sentimental love poem..filled with unfolded mysteries...thanks for this gothic love poem!

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brittany 15 December 2008

this is very very good i almost found myself tearing up.......... thanks for sharing! brittany

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*Trusting You* 13 December 2008

wow... I dont even know what to say, this is sooo good I love it! ! ! I am going to add it to my favs. the beginning the ending.... just wow... you did a Fantastic job with this. Becca

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Thad Wilk 12 December 2008

Ahh melancholy and sweet Sebastine! Love it, a wonderful poem an story - of love! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 December 2008

Rest in piece my soul............in you.Good writes Sebastian.

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C T Heart 12 December 2008

Beautiful poetic description of gothic love.....a 10/10

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Reshma Ramesh 12 December 2008

sad and again a good ending...............well penned

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