When everyone in this world gone to sleep
she is the only soul who awaken's from her bed
As she walks the lonely road
her dark shadow seen crawling on the wall
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a heart touching poem.....expressing the genuine love and her helpless plight..fighting betwn her wishes and impossibility! ! ! ....
so sad....so sad....whatta wonderful love they had...but is it justfiable? speechless on ths poem of urs sweet tine..
a sentimental love poem..filled with unfolded mysteries...thanks for this gothic love poem!
this is very very good i almost found myself tearing up.......... thanks for sharing! brittany
wow... I dont even know what to say, this is sooo good I love it! ! ! I am going to add it to my favs. the beginning the ending.... just wow... you did a Fantastic job with this. Becca
Ahh melancholy and sweet Sebastine! Love it, a wonderful poem an story - of love! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad
Rest in piece my soul............in you.Good writes Sebastian.
so touching...this is heart-quenching... very expressive..the thoughts are impressive ...the lines flows smoothly...bringing the pain and the hollowness into my heart... really...really sad.... 10+++ for this...