Saturday, February 10, 2007

Got Your Heart................... Comments

Rating: 4.9

The sky seems so bright today
Why I float on the breeze today
People who never had a ray
Why are they laughing today?
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Tara Acharya
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Ashish R 10 April 2007

Its a lovely poem Tara. Simple words and the last line brings out the beauty in it. Ashish.

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jim hogg 18 March 2007

Tara, the sunshine of love positively beams out of this very fine poem. jim

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Raghavan Warrier 11 February 2007

An excellent little poem centered on a single emotion. But the extension of internal joy to nature and objects around is done very well - without any artificiality or pretences. It makes the poem simple and beautiful.

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Geoff Warden 10 February 2007

Very nicly done Tara I agree with Jerry today a little rep.. but all in all very nice....

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Jerry Hughes 10 February 2007

Tara, this is light-hearted and optimistic little poem, 'today' got a bit repetitious, other than that fine. Fondly...

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Zen Bojczuk 10 February 2007

So light... it makes the head spin. So romantic.. like dancing on the clouds. Zen

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Ana x 10 February 2007

this is so romantic, though i don't like this type of poetry, i found it really good one, are u in love dear?

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