Thursday, November 6, 2008

Got To Get Home Comments

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Racing on the road,
Trying to get home,
Will I make it?
Or will I not?
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Lily Austin
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Mimzy Sue 06 November 2008

Very nice poem lily. I loved it how about more poems? keep it up mimzy

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Made me want to get you home great poem Please read a few poems of mine i would love to see what you think thank you

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Jerry Hughes 06 November 2008

..................almost 'there' Lily. Apart from that I enjoyed the urgency of your poem. Cheers, Jerry

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