Thursday, November 13, 2014

Got To Get Away Comments

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I'm sick and tired of the way I'm livin'
hanging' out all night
with different women,
I gotta slow down so I can finally breathe
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Bernard Snyder
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La Donna Woods 29 June 2016

Good, and I'm sure many can relate. Living a quiet peaceful life is in season.47467

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Kewayne Wadley 20 June 2015

Certainly worth reading. Man life and certain circumstances will make you feel boxed in. Trapped. I loved how you related it into needing to escape from everything to find the perfect release in the simplicity in the country side. Nicely written. Liked the rhyme scheme. Now lets talk about the dune buggy lol! Nicely done

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Bernard Snyder

Bernard Snyder

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