Wednesday, September 2, 2020

Gossiping Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gossiping eyes

Carted by senses deep and drawn,
Mingle my heart to breath horizon.
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Paramananda Mahanta
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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 September 2020

A well crafted piece. Truly magnificent....10+++

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 September 2020

Nice and very deep meaning. I reckon if your last line can be the same as in the previous stanza things will rock. My 2 cents

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