Gossamer Robe Comments

let's not have any talk of cold northern waves, but get right to the riot of fires! ! ! this shall go into June's a showcase for PH poets, found in my list of poems on my PH site. thanks. i think i'll go look for some pink tipped blossoms in the backyard this afternoon. bri :)

Revisited today, as promised. Now I have doubt: Are the pleasures offered amorous? I believe, it is not. I read: ...spiders' silken web the HONOURED SILKEN wound courageously embracing the secrets of creations MAGNIFICENCE..... Do the preceding lines not suggest that it the most important. most magnificent of all pleasures? Or have you used the word amorous just to contrast the preceding lines of beautiful poetry? Exquisite!

Seema, Marvellous poem on love, passion et al. From starting line precariously hanging over/delicately crafted cleft..... to oblivious to the amorous pleasures/it sought to envelope in its billows, the passion, the emotions and the sensuality slowly well up and peak. Fantastic write. Your choice of words is truly immaculate. Congrats and thanks for sharing. A full ten...