Thursday, July 3, 2014

Gori Chali Piya Ke Desگوری چلی پیا كے دیس Comments

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Dil ne ki jab peyar ki bhool,
Chehra bana gulab ka phool,
Masti bhari nigahon mein,
Shokhi aa gai bahon mein.
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Khalida Bano Ali 28 February 2017

Beautiful....................................................................................................

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 23 August 2016

bare khubsurat nazm hai but these two lines just touching heart smoothly Dil ne ki jab peyar ki bhool, Chehra bana gulab ka phool,

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Khalid Saifullah 09 January 2015

Ek khoobsoorat aur dilkash nazm...............10

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Amitava Sur 10 July 2014

A beautiful description of the marriage of a young girl with all fun and frolics ending with a heavy heart at the point of her departure with some confusions and fear in mind, very rightly described in few lines as.... Dil mein dar keyun rahta hay. Keya jane bhag mein keya likha hay. Beti ki shadi ek jua hay. ................ very true

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Kirti Sharma 07 July 2014

awsm! the lines are so true..

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 July 2014

Aapki kavita Bahut pyaari hai. Very true said, dowry is the reason. Thanks for sharing it.

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