Friday, June 8, 2007

Gorgeous Comments

Rating: 5.0

When will you see
It's not up to you and me
and life's not perfect
It was never meant to be
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Moth Harris
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Fallen Too Far 13 July 2007

That is lovely! It totally gave me the shivers (and that's a good thing) 'Nother good one! ! :)

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Bob Oldfield 17 June 2007

I agree about the symbolism! I love the image of not shivering on the journey through winter... beautiful stuff! All the best Bob

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Raul Castelan 09 June 2007

There is just so much symbolism in your work, and I love that. You should really get in touch with the SYMBOLISTS POETS of the 1800s to inspire you some more.

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Lillian J. 08 June 2007

I enjoyed this very much, a sense of sweetness and promise throughout. Lilly :)

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