Goodnight's Prayer Comments

on the strength of the rhyming and ideas, i score it a good...almost very good. peace/this isn't quite right but it is close enough. thanks for sharing.

Make me ride on chariot dream Love for others, in me, grow; And when I wake in morning's gleam Give me strength, my boat, to row a beautiful thought. great write.

great poem, so much hope and melancholy to be felt while reading it.

Love for others, in me, grow; Give me strength, my boat, to row the poem is totally impressing, nevertheless, here are my best lines. They are poetically syntated and accurately invased. It's sure, you are a good poem reader... It ooze from your works