Monday, January 21, 2019

Goodnight Rain-Goodnight Love Comments

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So many words in my head, ...tired...
Writing poems in my sleep
Bed says, sleep or write!
...I don't take sides...get it? ...huh, hu?
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Gio Masserati
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Sandra Feldman 21 January 2019

This poem is full of feeling. It's like a breath of tenderness in the middle of emptiness. Quite a different and stirring kind of rain.

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Gio Masserati 22 January 2019

Yes..., I suppose so, I haven't read it over again today, but will trust your observations as spot on. Until then as rain has subsided, clarity and clearer vision opens our eyes and we See through as transparency invites us to look closer and inside....thanks, always a pleasure to hear from you, Sandra! Gio

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