Monday, January 26, 2009

Goodnight Little Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Goodnight little angel, please gather your tears,
Use them as balm on my brow and my fears.
The lanterns of love, burn bright in your eyes,
Let them light me a path through the darkening skies.
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Laurie hill
COMMENTS
Jean Dament 13 September 2009

This is a beautiful & sweet poem. You are very talented. Thanks for sharing.

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Rosalita Fernandez 09 June 2009

Again you write so beautifully, i feel i want to cry (in a good way of course!) beautiful, you are so so talented

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Ruth Walters 28 April 2009

That's such a sweet poem Laurie. Ruth

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Sonya Florentino 19 April 2009

it is not clear here if there is a real angel or simply angelic human beings...what is clear is that there is a lot of love and comforting being given and received...so so touching.... :)

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Tracey Brownsword 05 February 2009

This poem is beautiful - obviuosly written from experience. You are a very talented poet, take care, Tracey.

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We all have a guardian angel and it is such a comfort. The imagery is beautiful in this piece and I really liked the first two lines. Lovely work. Karin Anderson

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Patti Masterman 30 January 2009

What a sweet treasure. The path is a comforting symbol. Very lovely.

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