Tuesday, September 23, 2008

…goodnight Boston, I Love You.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can’t you see all that I have done for you?
The countless tears I have cried.
I have given all I have
There is nothing left inside
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Jim Milks
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Ron Flowers 27 September 2008

Jim, I am not quite sure who you were speaking to, but its is certainly well written. By the way, Boston is one of my favorite cities. Regards Ron

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Scarlett Treat 26 September 2008

Jim, I enjoyed this very much, but did wonder if Boston was the city or someone named Boston? I think, either way, it is very well done, and the sentiment is the same either way! Will check out some of your other work soon. Scarlett

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Well done Jim Milks. The tragedy is designed with such a striking way, with special words and rhyme. Thanks (to you and to Boston) for sharing. Joseph Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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