Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Goodnight And Goodmorning! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I KNOW, I KNOW, I KNOW!

We just spoke a while ago.
I can't tread alone.
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 June 2010

I'll still be/Your love…/Eternity! ’…’too soft to touch’ ‘Good night my love.../Now, rest your weary head on my poetic pillow’…metaphor excelled all parameters [nodding head with applause] This to be listened poetry [not read] …finally say …tons of romantic adrenaline androgen and xx hormones required for all readers…for ‘too soft to hold it very long’ Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Yacov Mitchenko 21 November 2009

Slightly reminiscent of Emily Dickinson. I enjoyed the directness and simplicity of diction. Thank you for sharing the poem, Almedia. By the way, how are you doing these days? Whenever you have the time, please read 'Control', 'Lovely Sun', and 'The Whole Artwork'. They're short pieces.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 19 November 2009

that indeed was a good night ant and good morning...lovely poem

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Claude H Oliver Ii 17 November 2009

Fascinating, fascinating.

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