Tuesday, December 27, 2011

Good-Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

The ocean swallows the sun
The world once more spun,
While the night, drinks up the last light
Leaving the day done-
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Smoky Hoss
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Adeline Foster 15 February 2012

All those clever metaphors, wow! Good write. Read mine -Cicatrix - Adeline

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Juan Olivarez 03 January 2012

There are ways of saying goodnight, and there are ways of saying goodnight. You have cornered the market my friend

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James Casey 29 December 2011

The ocean swallows the sun, SO... That's what happens to it Good Write

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Buxton Shippy 29 December 2011

A cleverly and artfully written poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 28 December 2011

Good night to you, , , but a dawn is also waiting for us to say Good morning, , So good morning too! ! ! a good poem! ! !

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Eric Cockrell 27 December 2011

thank you..... and good night to you!

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