Monday, August 19, 2013

Goodbye While This Heart Is Still Too Young To Break Comments

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Goodbye: There, I have said it - while this love is still too young to shutter the walls of my heart;
I have tasted the bits of its sword, and from the linger of lust in its eyes, it can surely cut deeper
O, this love, which could not be pure, like many others strewn before my path,
And I could not disclose my fragile heart once again, upon the guillotin’d blade of such a un–loving ripper…
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N.K. Trevor
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David Wood 21 August 2013

Love is a many splendid thing when it truly hits you.

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Dave Walker 19 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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