Saturday, October 24, 2009

Goodbye To Love Comments

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Goodbye love
you must leave me at once
I can't take it no more
you forcing me to fall for guys
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Brittney Miller
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the last verse is great, comparing flag with love, that's great thought. the poem is good and appealing to those who know what love is. i also liked the title.

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Donielle Smith 24 October 2009

Hi, Brittney, I can really relate to this particular poem, because I've been there a time or two myself. I enjoyed reading it. The art of poetry flows creatively from you heart. Continuted success! ! Donielle S.

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