Thursday, January 3, 2008

Goodbye To Life Comments

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My phone rings
I hear tears running down her face
A whisper asking for help is all I could hear
She lays in bed, motionless
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jason zas
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Desiree Whitamore 08 January 2008

wow. just...wow. that was really good. did that really happen? deep man.

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Shane Clift 04 January 2008

Wow I really don't know what to say, nice work with words. Hits close to home, thank you.

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