Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Goodbye To Grief Comments

Rating: 5.0

A girl in red dress laced with black,
Was sitting with her hands folded,
And eyelids exposed.
Her lips were the reason of rose's softness,
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Asavri Dhillon
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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018

Hi Asavri, I read this poem with a heavy heart.... Her lips are the reason for the rose's softness Her silence made its color bold... Lovely expression of sorrow... Full score and onto MyPoemList

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Asavri Dhillon 02 June 2018

Thank you so much..

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Chinedu Dike 05 February 2018

A poignant piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in heightened rendition. Beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Asavri and do remain enriched.

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Tom Billsborough 15 September 2016

To find an end to grief takes a lot of courage. Well expressed

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Asavri Dhillon 30 October 2016

Thank you sir..

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Amarjit Ghumman 03 August 2016

Good poem. Stay blessed dear Asavri

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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016

Thanks Ma'am.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 August 2016

An excellent and bold goodbye to grief. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Asavri Dhillon 24 September 2016

Thank you so much sir!

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Asavri Dhillon

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