A girl in red dress laced with black,
Was sitting with her hands folded,
And eyelids exposed.
Her lips were the reason of rose's softness,
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A poignant piece of poetry elegantly brought forth in heightened rendition. Beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing Asavri and do remain enriched.
To find an end to grief takes a lot of courage. Well expressed
An excellent and bold goodbye to grief. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Hi Asavri, I read this poem with a heavy heart.... Her lips are the reason for the rose's softness Her silence made its color bold... Lovely expression of sorrow... Full score and onto MyPoemList
Thank you so much..