it is really a hard time
when you go away,
for you gave me so many things
which were really wonderful...
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it's late to say goodbye to beloved 2011 now, still i will.you've written a nice poem, again, your poem deals with things in a new perspective.that's great, and genuine.
Nice poem, we always hope for the better...hope your new friend will treat you even better...
Nice use of personification...liked it a lot...keep them coming. -SG
Gentle usage of personification and beautiful thoughts for the bygone and the upcoming year.Nice work.
Excellent poem/ i really like this one! ! Each year gives us many memories and we living in that memories in the coming year! ! Top marks! ! ! !
Excellent poem/ i really like this one! ! Each year gives us many memories and we living in that memories in the coming year! ! Top marks! ! ! !
Your next friend will be more lovable than this one...Happy new year!
yeah, each year is special for us, it is difficult to say goodbye. you are right, just like leaving a friend. But it is natural. May god Bless you to achieve more than that of the previous year! HAPPY NEW YEAR, to you dear Neetha! it is my great pleasure to know that you are a malayali. we are natives. nice it is! :)
i liked your poem. and i had a smile knowing you had a nice year. hope youu will have all the best in ths new year
Nice comparison! Lovely feelings. I always give more marks to talented children. But here I have only 10++++. Please adjust Nitha :)
nice thought, we all hope the new year brings happiness with it and give thanks for what we already have received.