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wow very good read thankyou for sharing truly inspiring 10++

Left in the vinegar of time, this work goes way beyond the modest vehicle of acknowledgement. It has power to germinate, reproduce broadcast pollens and branch off into groves, forests or jungles of expressions- silently, absently absurdly Salud n aroha r

simply a wonderful poem by the imagery eclectically tendered, yet with amazing metaphors ingeniously sanctified by the dictum, great work,10+, thanks for sharing

I a dramatic note.....you hold so well the last minute fast flickering moments of the life lamp before it blows out..... with all the anguish of the painful parting, , , reminded of Gray's Elegy.